The Homeless Man and His House
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A New Day
The sound of people starting their cars up to go to work is what usually woke him every morning. He stayed on a street where there were still residents who went to work. Streets that had seen all the good people move out were streets that he stayed away from.
He got up off his pallet: a rotten collection of filthy blankets and sleeping bags he had heaped upon the wooden floor to create a cushion on which to sleep. He looked around the room. It was an upstairs bedroom. There was grimy plastic over the sole window. Over in one corner, some ghost from the past had gotten cold enough to risk a fire. The charred plaster and wood survived to see this day.
The house was abandoned long ago. Much like countless other houses in the area, owners had been foreclosed on, or had gone to jail, or worse. He had no idea who the owner of the house used to be. It was Deek’s house now, and Deek and his crew allowed him to stay there; that’s all that mattered to him.
When he had first moved his stuff in here, he had jumped at every sound and worried constantly that the owners would return and find him there. After awhile, that particular fear faded. Deek had shown up one day and asked him why he was there. He told him his situation and a typical street arrangement was made where he would spend whatever money he spent on drugs to buy them from Deek, or one of the people working for the drug dealer. It was a common way that the homeless could acquire a small amount of security.
With the arrangement, which soon became known among the people frequenting the street, the homeless man was left alone. No one bothered him, beat him for fun, or told him to get out of the house. He had attained pseudo-customer status, and that meant no one was to stop him from bringing money to Deek.
He grabbed a small cardboard box off the floor and produced a cold bagel. He ate it standing there in the dim morning light that struggled to reach him through the softly shimmering plastic window. The hardwood floors that had been so magnificent in their prime were now greasily coated with time objectified. He knew from experience that if your skin touched that floor, it would stick to it. He had been revolted by the sensation, and he always remembered to stand or set himself on his pallet. Most of his meals were eaten standing, as he ate his tasteless breakfast now.
He often wondered what had happened to the people that lived here. There was no evidence left behind, or if there was, a previous squatter had cleared it out or sold it. He imagined that several families had lived in the two-story home over the years. It saddened him, for reasons unknown, that the house had lost favor with normal people. It seemed to deserve better.
The homeless man was thirsty. For the past two nights he had failed to procure enough water for morning. He wouldn't make the same mistake again tonight. He went over toward the shut and locked wooden door and unlocked it. He grabbed his tattered Army fieldjacket – insignia, rank, and name dutifully removed – and went out, closing the door behind him.
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Interesting read, I invite you to enjoy my own version of homelessness. http://evictedanddesperate.blogspot.com
.....great writing again my friend and will be posted to my Facebook page with a direct link back here - I would love to see you receive more readers - as this is such an evocative piece in the capable hands of your sensitive writing style - I could picture it in the cinema of my mind - lake erie time ontario canada 12:35pm
and I like how you leave certain elements/facts out of your writing in order to let the imagination of your reader to decide.
A brilliant read Jason and here's to many more to share on here.
Take care and have a great day.
Eiddwen.
It was brilliant but also so sad. He can have some great plans for our lives but we can have no guarantee than we won't end up like this man.
voted up , useful,awesome,interesting and beautiful , great story ! very heartfelt and sad , thanks for the read:)
It was a very powerful story. And you are right, it is going to get worse in the next few years.
Wow Jason! A very touching and moving story. God bless the Veterans. Thank you for serving as well!
God bless,
Sunnie
Very good story. If I could, I would like to link this to my Helping the Homeless hub.
You also might want to check out my 3 part story of our life, trying to get my husbands disability. Thank you for allowing the link.
Excellent article - you have painted a picture that is probably lived thousands of times daily, all over America - sad, but true - B.
This story made me sad. It happens all to often. Thank you for sharing someone's reality with us Jason.
How sad and eye opening that our country continues to allow homelessness...there's got to be a better way! Reading your hub about this poor veteran broke my heart, seeking solace in an abandoned house and depending on a drug dealer to be able to live in peace. This is a truly touching story and all the sadder because of it's ring of truth. Voted all buttons across (except funny of course).
Jason,
As I was reading this I was thinking about numerous articles that I have read lately about the housing/homeless problem in Detroit. It was the Motor City that was in my mind the entire time I read this and then I saw that you were from Michigan...would that be the inspiration?
Beyond setting, you have spoken to a sad reality here for so many people, in particular, our veterans. This is a great job that I will be sharing!
Thomas
I like this Hub a lot... being from Detroit myself, I've seen and published some stories about the homeless people there. Not as good as this though.






















silver lining 5 Level 1 Commenter 8 months ago
A veteran no doubt. So many of these soldiers come back damaged in ways that make them unable to take up where they left off. Sad.
Thanks